Thursday 11 October 2012


We were asked to find a message from inbox.We are required to describe the emotion of the sender and expand the original sentence to at least 30 words.

Original message:

``Jeevy,wake up!!!’’

Expanded version:

Her head felt so heavy that she can’t even lift it from her white,fluffy pillow. Her deep sleep was disturbed by the sounds of birds chirping.As loud as they were screaming turbulently. She feels irritated and looks around the room half-consciously.  She startled when her eyes caught up to one of the post –its she pasted on the wall. She has a library induction to be attended! She grabbed her phone hastily and texted her friend, Jeeivita right afterwards.A bundle of nervousness travels down her whole body.She grabbed her towel and rushed for bath.

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